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fatherson and donkeyFather and his sontake a donkey to the market。You""re stupid why do you walk。You can ride the donkey。So the father gets on the donkey。You are not a kind father。You ride on the donkey and you litter boy walks。So the father gets off the donkey and his son gets on the donkey。You are not very nice to your father!You ride and he walks!
So the father gets on the donkey and sits behind his son。Is that your donkey?Are you crazy。Two person!You are very heavy! The donkey is nearly dead。So the father and his son get off the donkey。Are you going to the market?Then carry the donkey!It is very tired。So the father and his son carry the donkey to the market。In the market everybody laughs。They don""t want to buy the donkey。It""s a very lazy donkey。
You""re carry going it to the market!So the father and his son and the donkey walk home again。If you try to make every body happy。You will make nobody happy。
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点评内容：文章妙趣横生，爸爸和儿子赶着鸭子去集市，不管怎么处理，也总招来路人的不满意。文章告诉我们一个道理：世事不能让任何人都满意，正如这小作者在文章结尾所说：“If you try to make every body happy，You will make nobody happy”。走自己的路，让别人去说吧！