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Olympic Games will be held in Beijing。 Now lovely Friendlies are famous in China。 They are Beibei， Jingjing， Huanhuan， Yingying， and Nini。 They form a Chinese sentence "Bei Jing Huan Ying Ni"， meaning " Beijing welcomes you"。 They also stand for the Fish， the Panda， the Tibetan Antelope ， the Beijing Swallow and the Olympic Flame。 This morning， I buy them and put them in my bedroom。At silent night， we only can hear the sound of leaves。 Suddenly，“Wake up! Wake up!”“Shhhh… Be quiet!” Let’s listen who is speaking。
“What are you doing， Huanhuan? It’s too late， go to sleep quickly! I’m too tired。”“Don’t go to sleep。 Don’t you forget the important thing?”I know the friendlies are talking。 But I don’t want to interrupt them。 I want to know what they are talking。 Let’s go on listening。But at this time， all friendlies jump out of the window with some paper in their hands。 I’m very sad， because I think they won’t be back。The next morning， I find happily the friendlies are all here。 Oh， my dear， a piece of paper is in my hand， with some words on it: Beijing welcomes you! Oh， it’s not a dream。
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点评内容：这是一篇小学生的想象作文，用童话的形式，通过夜里福娃送宣传单的事情表达了小作者对我国承办2008奥运会的支持与期盼。文章构思新颖，是一篇创新之作。