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There are four seasons in a year。They are spring，summer，fall and winter。
Spring is green。Summer is red。Fall is golden and winter is white。What"s my favorite season，do you know?Guess!Yes!You are right!
My favorite season is summer。Because is hot in summer。I can go swimming in the swimming pool。I often go swimming with my friends。
We have a good time in the swimming pool。I also buy some ice-cream。I like ice-cream very much。It"s tasty and sweet。At home，if I feel hot，I will turn on the air-conditioner。It"s cool!You will feel confortable at once!
I like summer best。Do you like summer?
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