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Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.
On the one hand some think that studying following the family teachers is better than self study. It can not only strengthen what you’ve learnt at school but help you learn more useful things as well.
On the other hand some people who have the different opinion consider it a waste of time and money for many training classes and family teachers are just working for money you can not learn something really useful there and thus lose the time of relaxing yourselves.
In my opinion as students we should really know whether we need a training class or family teacher. First make sure that you need them and they would be helpful then choose a reasonable one. Just remember once you start and never give up.
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Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend .There are two different viewpoints about it.
Some people think that going to training class or having family teachers can not only strengthen the knowledge the students have learned but also help them to study better .What’s more students can gain some knowledge that hasn’t been told in class.
However some others have an opposite opinion in their opinion this kind of study can make students passive in their studies and always depend on others .What’s worse some Training Class and Family teachers care not students but money .So it’s a waste of money .Students need have a rest after school .The Training Class will take up most of their spare time .
In my opinion both viewpoints are reasonable .The choice should depend on which one is fit for the students himself .If he’s good at self-studying he may stay at home and study by himself if he does well in listening to what teachers say studying in Training Class would also be a good choice .
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