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The summer vacation is over。 It’s true that time always flies fast。 During the vacation， the weather was hot and I could not do much work， but I lived happily。
As the afternoon was hot， I did my work in the morning。 I usually got up at 6:30 and took a walk in the garden for half an hour。 After breakfast， I began reading English and Chinese and did some exercises in maths。 Those took me three hours or more。 I worked quite hard and made great progress。
I spent the afternoon outside。 I went to swim and it was funny。 I would not go home until it was about five or six o’clock。 Sometimes a friend of mine would come to see me and we would spend some hours listening to music。
In this way I spent my vacation happily。 And I not only studied well but also became a good swimmer。 Now I am in good health and high spirits。
Wonderful。 I'm expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time。 You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences。Agoodbeginning。 A perfect ending。 Well-organized。 Perfectly-expanded。