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I think I am very healthy！ Do you know what healthyis？Look，that is health
(y)！ I exercise every day。Sometimes，I play tennis!And sometimes， I run around the part(park)。 And for breakfast，I usually eat eggs，bread(，)
and drink some milk。For lunch，I always eat rice，fish，and some vegetables。In the afternoon ， I usually eat some fruit。I like eating apples， oranges，bananas and pears。For dinner，I usually eat noodles and soup。 But I don"t like eating junk food。Because they are very very dirty!And they are bad for my health。 I like drinking juice。And I drink juice three or four times a week。 Emm……，My healthy lifestyle helps me get good grades。 I think I am very healthy!
This article is very good ， I think。 I don’t know what grade you are in。 In this article you tell the readers you are healthy， and you introduce your eating habbits。 But you have made a small mistake。 That is you can’t use the punctuations (标点符号)well。 Sometimes you use Chinese punctuations， sometimes you use English punctuations。 I think you had better pay more attention to it。
标题：What is healthy
You are great! Work hard and you’ll make more progress。