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MY HERO-Barack Obama
Obama used to be upset about his skin color bacause
of racism . he was born in Hawaii US.When
he was studing
in a school therethere were only three black kids.To protect himself against their taunts Obama told his classmates that he came from the family of African prince .But his mother told him that people would only respect him if him
was a use ful person
–then people wouldn’t care whether he was black or white.Then Obama didn’t care about others’ taunts.He began to study very hardand he graduated from Harvard University -- The university I always dream about ! So Obama is
hero in my heart.And on 1.20.2009 Obama bacame
a president.The US president! He is the first African-American president in American history.He is very powerful he beated
the rascism
< racism> !So Obama is a hero in my heart.Obama plays basketball a sport he participated in as a member of his high school's varsity team.Because of it he has 6 abdominal muscles ! I think Obama is strong enough ! SoObama is a hero in my heart.Before announcing his presidential candidacy he began a well-publicized effort to quit smoking.It’s hard for someone to do itbut Obama can!SoObama is a hero in my heart.I always see Obama but just on TV or in the newspapers . I want to meet him one dayit’s not impossible just like when Obama was a child he couldn’t believe that he would be a president one day .Right?If I can meet Obama one day I will say to him :“oh you are my hero——Obama !”
苏州景范二班 陈佳
【简评】通过你的文章，我了解了你心目中的英雄------奥巴马。正是由于他的努力、强壮、意志、力量、平等等优秀品质，使他成了你的偶像。见与不见到他并不重要，关键是你能以他为榜样，激励你的人生。
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